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  • Aeon Legion
  • J.P. Beaubien
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  • 04 July 2018
  • 978152372022

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DOWNLOAD Aeon Legion 107 CHARACTERS Å eBook, PDF or Kindle ePUB ↠ J.P. Beaubien Time travel has made the Edge of Time a dangerous place To protect the Edge of Time from the disastrous alterations of time travelers the Aeon Legion seeks the greatest soldiers and warriors from the most bloody war torn eras in history Those they deem worthy gain a chance to compete in the toughest training program ever designedTerra Mason a plain eighteen year old girl from the modern United States has an impressive stu. I found out about this author and book through his YouTube channel of bad writing advice which unlike the name suggests is good writing advice Lots of sarcasm and wit making fun of standard tropes in many different genres though typically YA What attracted me most about this book was the synposis and the twist of the third paragaph Typically you ll see the monoamorous couples described with each having their own paragraph but no he s a Nazi he s her enemy and that s hilarious Although the synopsis is a bit misleading as at no point does Hanns ever try proving Nazis were heroes nor was he all that confused about people referring to him as a monster He just a normal Nazi who thought what he was doing was just and that Germany should winPerhaps I inadvertantly led myself to have higher than usual expectations but the book is rathernot good It just feels a bit awkward since I feel the uality of his videos is so high it s a bit of a surprise to see this book written as it isIt starts off in a library with our heroine Terra coming face to face with the Nazi antagonist of the book Hanns The awkward wording kind of threw me off It gets going immediately which was a little jarring but otherwise would ve been okay if it wasn t so telly instead of showyI thought perhaps only this first initial scene would ve been like that which would ve been rather interesting to see play out We get told the action and find out the characters perspectives on it later But no this trend persists the entirety of the book It s 100% telling and not showing That s one of the biggest and most well known trope of bad writing of all I m just shocked that the author had this problemIt s frustrating in general to read a book that tells you everything without showing but it feels all the frustrating coming from someone who gives out writing advice and good advice at thatSo much happens to our main character but we never get any sort of real reaction from her There is a sentence or a couple words here and there but nothing that feels impactful emotional genuine or lastingShe s approached by Silverwind a protector of time with a job offer of monumental proportions guarding time itself And how does she react Barely at all Perhaps a little shocked confused but other than that I have no idea I m not even told thatShe ends up accepting the offer of course and I was curious to see how the author would handle the parents ButI am a bit confused Terra literally tells her parents what she s doing and we never see their reaction They were apparently okay with it and she sends them an update after she leaves on her ventures then later comes home at the end like it s no big deal and her parents are just chill with it I know it s a little detail and YAs are NOTORIOUS for dropping the parents but this was such adrop Just a weird way to go about itThe main character in general is mind boggling ignorant and plain stupid She s always shocked of every new piece of information she hears regardless if it should come at a surprise any It s like she doesn t have the ability to remember things or logically deduce thingsTerra Blinked A thousand years You re that oldVita sighed Why do they always find that surprisingTerra knew the Saturnians were older than they appeared but she had no idea they were that oldYou were literally told that those people were immortal and you re just as shocked every time you hear someone s ageTerra just looked confusedTerra raised an eyebrow I m confusedLiterally one sentence in between separates thatMost of the descriptions in this book stem from the environment or the appearances of people As an example the character Lycus We re introduced with him mostly being in shadow glaring eyes and when he smiles that wolf like grin as we re reminded every time he smiles which is often it creeps Terra out But why Just what was it that made him so immediately scary to her We re told she s afraid of him and that she tries her best to avoid him but we re never told why What is her thought process behind her fear What aspects of him what sort of presence does he give off that s so frightening We re constantly told he s scary and intimidating without actually seeing him do anything scary or intimdating view spoilerAt least not until a bit later but that doesn t excuse the nagging reminders of it earlier with nothing to back them up or explain them I did enjoy the concept of his three faces though each with their own name and personality but it bothered me to have so many characters mis naming him while he was in his Lycus face form whateveryoucallit hide spoiler The Life List of Adrian Mandrick in the toughest training program ever designedTerra Mason a plain eighteen year old girl from the modern United States has an A Very Strange Dolls House impressive stu. 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DOWNLOAD Aeon Legion 107 CHARACTERS Å eBook, PDF or Kindle ePUB ↠ J.P. Beaubien Bborn streak Her persistence and bravery gains the notice and sponsorship of one of the Aeon Legion's greatest heroines Now Terra must turn that stubbornness into determination if she is to contend with history's finest soldiers and somehow pass the Aeon Legion's final test the mysterious Labyrinth She will not uit Terra will prove that even someone as average as her can still be a heroineHanns Speer is polite good nature. 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accordingly Nikias Orion Prometheus all characters from Greek mythohistory Endymion s symbol is a moon ARRRGH breathe Not to mention all the positions in the army consul cohort leggionaire centurion are ripped right from Rome The fights were like a fcking videogame In fact all the book was Am I the only one who noticed Everything happens in stages the enemies and weapons have a number of abilities and very specific limits and there is always a precise way to escape the situation The fact that most of the book focused on the training with little time left to forge relationships and delve in the subplots did not help I didn t believe Terra s feelings positive or negative for other people and the subplots seemed to come out of nowhere with very little previous work Terra leaving and returning home It was very weird First she tells them I m joining the time police and apparently they take it as normal and when she returns they act as if she had gone away for a couple of days to a regular training course The way Delphia is treated is similar She appears early to provide an introduction to the city and then briefly returns in the end to say hi One would think Terra would make the effort of keeping in touch with her since she was so nice to her Oh and her backstory also came out of nowhere and wanted to explain something that really didn t need all that much of an explanationOverall despite all of the above I liked the worldbuilding a lot It shows that it is very well thougt out and I found it uite original I loved the character of Lycus What can I say I have a sweet spot for those Roland and Delphia also made my day I could even empathise with Hanns and his fight with his superior s blind faith in false science Us science people understand each other Terra s character development although heavy handed was very well done I disliked her at the beginning for being so spoiled and whining but I ended up liking what she represented So will I read the following installment It 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I put this book down at around 53%What I LikedFirst I have to give regards to Beaubien s YouTube account Terrible Writing Advice which I greatly enjoy He clearly understands the pitfalls of various ubiuitous fiction tropes especially those in YA novels and it shows I didn t roll my eyes at a love triangle nor was I thrown out of the world by any obvious plotholesThe novel s greatest strength is in its premise Beaubien successfully made a world where knights Nazis martial artists and other historical heroes and villains could interact with each other which I found fascinating Imagine say if Roman gladiators had made a futuristic Colisseum on a level of Saturn City or a debate scene with Greek scholars pitted against Tibetan monks I also liked the idea of his protagonist and to a lesser extent his other charactersWhat I Didn t Likebut beyond their initial impressions they didn t have much depth This could ve been solved through my main problem endemic to the entire book Beaubien s writing styleThe writing is very blunt and relatively unemotional Most sentences just state something that happened X stared at Y Y shook his head He had a hard time believing it Y activated the machine It then sputtered and turned on That sort of writing A visceral writing style would both increase readers interest through sentence variety and descriptive language and add depth to the characters I wanted to see from the side characters to get a better sense of the worldMy last major point for Aeon Legion Labyrinth addresses its pacing There are large portions of the book dedicated to explaining the rules of the world and of its technology The information itself is fine and often explained through action though redundant If an object does something it s usually unnecessary to then explain what had happened Alternately if an author explains what an object does the object doesn t have to be used in that exact way a sentence later Summary if you don t mind the blunt writing style Aeon Legion Labyrinth is a fairly entertaining read I wish Beaubien had done with the premise but maybe he ll expand on his writing in the rest of the series A Taste of Submission inventor of a time travel machine and a dedicated member of the Nazi Party Yet he cannot understand why people from the future regard him and his fellow Nazis as monsters Now he must use his charisma and cunning to challenge the seemingly My Life My Times And The Future invincible Aeon Legion and Saint Nicholas its monopoly on time travel He will not uit Hanns will steal history Pizza Real Reading itself Chinaberry Sidewalks if he has to mistakenly believing Chasing Alpha it will prove him to be a her. 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    PDF READ Aeon Legion CHARACTERS Å eBook, PDF or Kindle ePUB ↠ J.P. Beaubien J.P. Beaubien ↠ 7 DOWNLOAD This book was written by the Terrible Writing Advice guy on Youtube After reading this book I can say that he followed his own advice up to the part where the plot is neededI'll give you a brief blurb Terra attacks time travelling Nazis and becomes a famous time knight's suire Then uh Terra goes to school and there are Na

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    PDF READ Aeon Legion J.P. Beaubien ↠ 7 DOWNLOAD This book was forced all of it Over the top clumsy obvious Examples The whole heroism as a concept theme Don't get me wrong it is a great debate but the book itself was in the end too black and white to be the appropriate ground to pose it The

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    PDF READ Aeon Legion CHARACTERS Å eBook, PDF or Kindle ePUB ↠ J.P. Beaubien I put this book down at around 53%What I LikedFirst I have to give regards to Beaubien's YouTube account Terrible Writing Advice which I greatl

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    PDF READ Aeon Legion I found this book not long after stumbling across the author's YouTube Channel To put my opinion of the book in one sentence it's One of my favorites I have read many of the other reviews here on goodreads so I am going to try and focus on things that I didn't see from the other review that I want to talk aboutThe most odd thing I found about this book is what audience it is going for For background I am a sopho in college at the moment Wha

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