Beyond Desire [Pdf/E–book]


Beyond Desire

summary Beyond Desire ☆ eBook, ePUB or Kindle PDF read ´ eBook, ePUB or Kindle PDF É Asghar Abbas Bbas explores a young girl's mind and tells her story in a uniue way He holds your attention while enticing the reader to relax and have fun trying to figure out who the real villain i I want to give an honest and yet constructive bias on this novellaThere is plenty to enjoy and there are also several things that I believe could be enjoyable for the reader in participation in the suspension of reality and delve in the world of Asghar AbbasLet us start with a break downPlot 5 stars without hesitation The plot is solid Enough turns and twists to make this one a page turner despite some clear deficitsWriting 3 stars This could easily hit 4 or 5 stars but just to many odd or out of place syntaxProseDialogue 2 stars however with some re visitation and character study this could easily turn into 5 stars as wellWorld Building 3 stars built in the real world so no need to enter epic world buildingThe strength of Beyond Desire is the plot and the several twists that are mingled between the pages I was taken off guard two or three times and that just doesn t happen with me I read so much that I am seldom surprised so this was some yummy goodness for me to experience There was enough suspense and anticipation to keep me eagerly turning the pages Iva is a solid and intriguing character There is room for some improvement here and greater development of the character I couldn t help but think of Lisbeth Salander from The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo I would suggest to revisit that character and book take some notes on her character and mold modify some of her attributes into Iva Add 5 to 10 pages on developing this character and you ll make a character so fascinating that she ll have a fan baseOverall story suggestions1 Add several pages with developing her scene Perhaps add a time piece at the beginning that includes Iva s room mate2 The biggest single issue with the novella was probably the IRA terrorist attack inside NYU Doesn t make sense and it feels plugged in My suggestion would be to revamp this sub story and turn it into a botched burglary at an on campus bank in which Iva was also visiting perhaps withdrawing some tuition money sent from abroad Or cashing a student loan Surely there could be a better tie in than the terrorist attack an IRA one at that With a carefully crafted bank botched ban robbery you could still come up with the same results as with the terrorist attack This one part of the story is the only reason that the book scores low enough to not be a 4 star review and this is from a guy who just read 100 books in November alone Add in a bank robbery would probably also increase your page count by another 5 to 10 pages3 Daze and Dizzy there dialogue was off They didn t come off as realistic heir apparent to a multimillion dollar company My suggestion would be to study the children of Donald Trump what has been written about them and what they have said in either tv shows or in magazines Watch a few episodes of apprentice with the intention of just studying how the children talk This would give these 2 characters a substantial boost in realistic prose and dialogue4 Prose in general needs to be revisited The spoken words doesn t seem to fit the characters at times I would suggest reading some Mark Twain to improve some of the dialogue during the hostage situation The confrontation with the antagonists at the end I would suggest a reread of the bloody banuet from Game Of Thrones forgot the book sorryMy favorite liner from the book I live in a brutal world where human beings are not human where knowing that death is the only outcome of life they still expect immortality Overall Asghar this is an impressive first showing You put it out there I thank you sharing this story with me and hopefully it will inspire me to reduce my reading and get to writing I have so many half baked stories and ideas that come from my own dreamland that I am eager to put down and develop I would imagine with a rework and after having read some of your blog writings know that you could easily juice this story up and in the process easily add another 50 to 75 pages to this story I would love love love to read a version 20 if it is in the works

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summary Beyond Desire ☆ eBook, ePUB or Kindle PDF read ´ eBook, ePUB or Kindle PDF É Asghar Abbas BEYOND DESIRE is a thriller that keeps you on the edge of your seat disarmed by self discovery and loss of innocence It's about the choices you have to make with the flow of fate It's One helll of a rideI m going to try and be totally unbiased sure the author gave me the book for free but he didn t ask anything in turn it s all me I got the book because I expressed real interest in reading it but I couldn t afford it and to encourage the amateur aspiring writer that I am but that s no reason to not be just to his workI had great hopes but I was also scared I wanted to read it at the perfect time perfect day perfect moment don t I with every book I had left the book for last I had been reading the author s blog for some days past so as to better the experience of the book to get a general feel of the writing and most of all to learn and just amuse myself I have to say that the author s writing has ripened and drastically evolved over time Anyhoo I knew I was gonna like this book I mostly know but I had no idea I was gonna enjoy it like I didI m awestruck It started so sweet so smooth so vulnerable I read with reverenceBeyond Desire is a mystery thriller 24 hours into the life of the smart beautiful and ambitious Iva Gyongy Iva moves from France to the Promised Land of NYC but her dreams take a turn for the worse when she finds herself in a gambling debt to a loan shark on someone else s behalf Iva is a na ve small town girl but what will happen when she s pushed to her limits I would have loved to stay and enjoy Paris because I read about it all the time but never got the chance to see it before I knew a lot about Paris I know my mother won t go to these places by herself not without me It s very plot driven I can t say much because the plot is so complicated and mysterious I don t want to spoil anyone and I don t want to give anything away believe me you don t want that Also because that s how I enjoy going in knowing almost nothing and it s one of those kinds of novelsThe novel is short but it doesn t matter IT DOES NOT MATTER it s complete it has everything I didn t even feel that it was short while reading it The author attacked the main character from almost every angle It has a lot of elements so many facets dimensions all your mystery desires and beyondNothing felt amiss The most the author could have done was add in a few descriptions and internal monologue but that s just me I like longer descriptions and thoughts when people tend to get annoyedPeople don t read the spoiler if you haven t read the book because you WILL regret it Read it once you re done with the book and tell me what d you thinkBut there s a catch view spoilerIt was clever using the high crime rate of NYC as a plot device However the siblings going to a little too much trouble to recruit Iva when they could have hired a gun like they did to pick her up ignorant spoilt brats and Adrian showing up seemed a bit contrived how did they even first meet hide spoiler

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summary Beyond Desire ☆ eBook, ePUB or Kindle PDF read ´ eBook, ePUB or Kindle PDF É Asghar Abbas About the darkness that all of us have but keep under control It's about dreams and the uestions we ask ourselves the answers we seek deep in the night but forget as soon as we awake A Whatever a writer writes his personality reflects in it but it takes sheer magic to write something so unlike yourself I know this because i know him personallyfeel jealous cuz y all dont Beyond desire is a book that is so full of unexpected turns that it ll completely encumber your intuition A diorama of mystery i call it The book revovles around iva gyongy a french girl living in Newyork to chase dreams larger than life This novella not only keeps you at the edge of your seat but every page contravene your guess of what can happen next A book concerted in a way that the reader keeps wondering through out the book either the victim is assailant or assailant is a victim Through out the very book it was hard to believe that a karachi born writer has written this yeap thats how good Asghar is with his workBest part NO LOOP HOLES IN THE THRILLERGet your hands on the copy right away because so much talent and so less exposure and no im not being biased at all

  • Paperback
  • 124
  • Beyond Desire
  • Asghar Abbas
  • English
  • 05 July 2020
  • 9781889131726

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    Beyond Desire [Pdf/E–book] I want to give an honest and yet constructive bias on this novellaThere is plenty to enjoy and there are also several things that I believe could be enjoyable for the reader in participation in the suspension of reality and delve in the world of Asghar AbbasLet us start with a break downPlot 5 stars without hesitation The plot is solid Enough

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