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Summary ☆ Diary ng Panget ✓ E-book, or Kindle E-pub Mahirap at panget si Girl tapos magnet siya ng mga poging mayayaman na boys YES Cliché YES So what makes this book special This story has made a lot of people online laugh as in hagalpak talaga with mat Borrowed a copy from a friend and I was really excited to read this but was not satisfied and was so disappointed Wasted my one sitting read time in this book I should have just finished reading other really good reads on my tablet Please guys don t waste your 150 pesos for this one I might give you a lot of reasons as to why you shouldn t Baka abutin nga ng ilang taon yung mga rants ko about this book But I ll make this simple1 Isang buklat mo lang sa libro tanggal na yung mga pages Mukhang tinipid ng publisher at dinikitan ng ordinaryong rugby2 If you think you ll like itthe story or maybe in general the book itself I m telling you right now it s a big NO Seriously The story Inaamin ng author na clich ang istorya Masyadong simple O di kaya mas mababa pa sa simple Paligoy ligoy Tila walang MATINONG patutunguhan3 The characters Yung bida Okay panget siya Valedictorian siya Pero the whole time TATANGA TANGA siya Daig rin niya ang mga matatanda kung makalimot Or she s just plainly stupid Just pick from the two and it s still not going to get better At ang pananalita niya mukhang palengkera Cross Sandford Minsan naiisip kong bakla tong lalakeng to na tila ba mayroong mens sa bawat orasWALANG CHARACTER BUILDING WALANG GROWTH Tuturuan ka lang ng bida paano maging tanga4 Trying hard jokes Tama na Hindi nakakatawa eh Masyadong pilit Dagdagan mo pa ng corny tuwing may joke 5 Diary ng Panget So this is supposed to be written in a diary style Nasaan ang diary style Nasa dulo ng bawat chapter BOOI don t care whether the author is Filipino but to be honest the story doesn t even deserved to be published Hah Am I being hard and rude Nah It s my review

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Summary ☆ Diary ng Panget ✓ E-book, or Kindle E-pub Cinderella story with a twist katatawanan A story na pwedeng pwede sa mga kabataan at pati na rin sa lagpas kabataan para sa kababaihan kalalakihan binabae o pusong lalaki A very funny and kakilig story NOTE This review is for the three books Here we goFirst point I think it s a little too informal for a book I mean it was the first time I had read a book with onomatopoeia as part of the description plus emoticons When it was still in Wattpad it s acceptable But now Uh hello editors But still it s not that many so I can just bear with it Second point there are some parts or scenes that should have been deleted I think it s not really important and are only filler for the story Gosh I paid 150 pesos per book just to read those fillers They could have deleted those and made the story a little shorter and compile them into a single book But hey It s business so what can I do Third point I don t like the materials used in this book I don t know Maybe I m just used with books that even if they re just paperbacks the cover are still a little harder than this one And the ink Oh the ink It doesn t smell good I really love inhaling the scent of my new books but with this one Ugh A big no noFourth point though some parts of the book can be deleted there are also some parts where even if they re not that important you just can t afford to lose them They are so hilarious that I really laughed out loud though those parts appeared only on the third book

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Summary ☆ Diary ng Panget ✓ E-book, or Kindle E-pub Ching headbang pa This is Eya's diary a girl who believes she's ugly and will meet Cross Sandford the most annoying nilalang ever Samahan natin si Eya sa nakakaloka niyang adventure sa Willford Academy A Reviewer s Note This contains spoilers Also please wear an open mind while reading this reviewDisclaimer I don t own the wordsparagraphs that are taken from the novel Diary ng Panget They are only used as references in this reviewReference HaveYouSeenThisGirl 2013 Diary ng Oanget Psicom Publishing Inc uezon City Philippines StrengthsEYA Typical na outcast pero lapitin ng boys The difference is she is not the clich damsel in distress heroine Also her attitude reflects the common thoughts of Filipina teen agers PHYSICAL LOOK May tatlong rason kung bakit maaaring makakuha ng atensyon ang physical look ng DNP a the reader is from wattpad and she is a fan of DNPDenny b the title I showed the book to non wattpad readers and their reaction Ay Anong meron sa title Bakit naman ganun Apparently the title is is a potential for piuing a reader s interest and c the one who saw the book is a manga lover because it so happened that DNP s cover is manga type Even my Korean students thought that DNP is a manga PROLOGUE Catchy at humorous ang prologue Personally it s the reason why I read DNP Hindi ito ang typical prologue na mababasa natin sa mga nobela it s even the reason why I really searched for the Become a Fan button of wattpad two years ago LANGUAGE Isa sa mga ikinatutuwa kong bagay tungkol sa DNP ang light atmosphere dahil na rin sa language na ginamit dito Magaan lang basahin at hindi trying hard magpalalim ng Tagalog Madali rin maka relate ang mga kabataan dahil sa natural na tone ng pananalita ni Eya HUMOR Both online and book version have this It s one good thing sa drama ba naman ng Pilipinas ngayon hindi pa ba natin gugustuhing magbasa ng isang kakatwang kwento Laughter is the best medicine sabi nga nila Areas of Improvement A COVER Kung strength ng DNP ang cover nito isa rin ito sa mga dapat ma improve Hindi nag ko compliment ang cover sa description ng mga bidaPang high school ang uniform ng babae at lalaki sa cover ng story samantalang sa intro ng story ang sabi e graduating na sa college si Eya I just can t imagine college students inside a sosy school wearing school uniforms that are meant for high schoolers I hope you re getting my point B DIARY ENTRIES The title does not compliment the content of the story Ang sabi kasi ng title Diary ng Panget It only suggests that the story must be about the diary of Eya However with barely five short diary entries I can t say that the story revolved around the diary of Eya It revolved about the actual life of Eya and the diary entries were only like her comments about what happened to her life Personally DNP pa lang ang nabasa kong may Diary sa title na may pinakamaiikling diary entries at content p5 1 sentence p27 2 sentences p54 5 sentences p85 12 sentences p116 3 sentences at iyon pang mga tipo ng diary entries na kumbaga sa clause embedded clause lang Buo pa rin ang kwento kahit tanggalin sila I believe there s still for the story to tell It is in need to give justice to its title or else the title Diary ng Panget won t fit it Buhay ng Panget will probably do C SPACING Napansin ko lang sa story ang laki ng spacing every after paragraph It s one reason why I can t say every page is meaty content wise Hindi naman kaliitan ang font at medyo malaki naman ang line spacing so why not use the tab spacing instead Marami pa sanang nadagdag na scenes mas masasabi pang may laman ang bawat page at mas maayos pa sana ang seuencing ng kwento D CROSS s POV p117 119 I understand Denny s intention to show the readers how Cross felt and thought in that situation since logical na kung paano sila napunta roon however his dialogues reactions and gestures will already be enough Nakabawas din iyon ng continuity sa flow ng kwento bumalik balik kasi sa eksena pati tuloy dialogues nagpaulit ulit na rin I mean we have to consider continuous flow of events and economy of words when writing Please remember that the story is entitled DIARY NG PANGET As much as possible kung pwede naming hindi na magsingit ng POV ng ibang characters lalo na at pwede naming hindi na lang the better A story s title is like a spell it may be broken because of one s sudden appearance E SLOW PACING LACKING DETAILS Personally natagalan ako sa mga pangyayari It s either napapahaba ang narration o napaparammi ang dialogues Hindi ko naman masabing dahil detailed kasi maraming mga scene na kailangan ng details pero wala namang details Ang labas tuloy walang masyadong na achieve ang first book Ex Lacking detailsa Kaso bigla akong pinigilan ng isa sa mga kaklase ko Hoy totoo ba yung rumors na kasama mo daw si Chad Jimenez sa mall OK Saan naman nanggaling yun Wag ka nang magdeny ugly girl may nakakita sa inyo DNP p55 uestions Paano siya pinigilan ng isa sa mga kaklase niya Hinawakan ba siya sa brasoPaano ito nagtanong Bitchy ba Para bang kakainin nang buhay si Eyab Sa I love you Spongebob part p39 isang AHH lang at narration na about next day ang setting It may be confusing dahil walang detail na magsasabi kung paano natapos ang pag uusap ng EYOSS lalo na at walang distinct spacing na maghihiwalay sa prior at succeeding event Slow pacing Iyong scene sa kotse ni Chad inabot ng 11 pages pp 97 107 Take note isang scene lang yan pero inabot na ng ganyan kahaba considering na 125 pages lang ang naka allot para sa kwento Again please consider economy of words F YUNG AND AY FEVER I noticed that yung and ay are used in the story every now and then even in cases that the two are not needed Using ay and yung repetitively may cause incoherence so please minimize the use of both We always have to have clear and smooth flow of ideas din po Ex Back off ay anak ng kamote bakit ba may instinct ako na kapag nagpapanic ay nanunulak ako ng tao At ang pinakamalala pa sa lahat ay automatic na nilabas ko yung pepperspray sa may bulsa ko nakuha ko lang yun for free sa grocery store nung isang araw I use it for protection from bad people and aliens and dinosaurs since gabi na ako umuuwi tapos itinapat ko pa yung pepperspray sa kanya habang napaupo siya sa may sahig dahil tinulak ko siya ng malakas at yung ice cream niya natapon sa may sahig DNPchokengkomatitikchokeng15 This paragraph may be edited asNatulak ko siya nang malakas Back off Napaupo siya sa sahig at natapon ang ice cream niyaAy anak ng kamote bakit ba may instinct akong nanunulak ng tao kapag nagpapanic At ang pinakamalala pa sa lahat automatic na nilabas ko ang pepperspray na nakuha ko lang for free sa grocery nung isang araw mula sa bulsa ko at itinapat yon sa kanya I use my pepperspray as protection from bad people and aliens and dinosaurs since gabi na ako umuuwi G CHAD AND EYE S CAR SCENELet s have this firstNanlaki ang mga mata ko kinilabutan ako sa naisip ko tinulak ko siya at kukuhanin ko na sana yung pepperspray sa bulsa ko kaso bigla na niya akong tinulak pahiga sa upuan ng kotse at pumaibabaw siya sakin habang hawak hawak niya yung kamay ko na may hawak na pepperspay pinigilan niya akong magamit ito DNP p97 When I read this part I was like 0o Plus the fact na parang wala lang yan kay Eya later oo nga t nagalit siya pero dahil na realize niyang joke lang ang ginawa ni Chad I mean sinong babae ang hindi magagalit na paibabawan ng isa lalaking hindi naman niya masyadong kilala They knew each other for less than three weeks and they barely talkmeet Kung sa boyfriend nga hesitant pa di ba In Philippine context it s already a form of harassment Disrespect yon sa pagkababae ni Eya and if it s some kind of joke well it s not a good joke especially na may driver sa unahan at pwede silang makita sa rearview mirror nang ganoon ang posisyon We also have to consider the age bracket of most DNP readers too young to realize that what Chad may be anti feminism H ITALICS In third person POV type of narration we use italic letters to denote that the words said are from the thoughts of the character in focus in the narration However in first person POV if it s going to be used for the same reason it s not needed since the narrator already holds the thoughts in the narrationEx Umm let me think nilagay niya sa may baba niya yung daliri niya at kunwa y nag iisip nakatingin siya sakin I feel like melting Pagkatapos ng ilang saglit ngumiti siyang muli oh that killer smile DNP p8 This may be edited as Umm let me think Nilagay niya sa ilalim ng baba ang daliri niya nang parang nag iisip Nakatingin siya sa kinI feel like meltingNgumiti ulit siya pagkatapos ng ilang saglitOh that killer smile I changed kunwa to na parang because since Eya holds the POV she musn t be aware of what s inside Chad s head Malay ba ni Eya kung totoo o kunwari lang ang pag iisip ni Chad di ba I FEMININE MALE DIALOGUES Personally sa book version ko lang na feel na parang naging sobrang feminine ng male dialogues na sinulat ni Denny Paulit ulit ko na po itong sinabi noon pero sasabihin ko pa rin ulit ngayon Please Writers avoid TagLish especially conyo language when writing a male character s dialogue and let him act his age and gender Exa Asar I m going out for a while with my friends and when I come back I want her out of this house Cross Sandford DNPchokengkomatitikchokeng34 Asar may be changed with an English curse that fits Cross s age eg Heck Or Damn b No it s ok I ll pick that Sige magbihis ka na I ll just wait sa counter Chad Jimenez DNPchokengkomatitikchokeng64c1 Talaga Sa Willford ka din That s great Walang problema pagkatapos ng klase mo at part time tsaka ka dumiretso sa anak ko just do your job well and I hope tumagal ka talaga sa kanya Cross s dad DNPchokengkomatitikchokeng32c2 I m sorry sanay lang kasi ako Alam mo na kelangang English Speaking for business purposes sa other countries Anyway saktong sakto ang dating mo hija kakaretire lang ng pang 25 na personal na katulong na hinire naming Cross s dad DNP p30 Aside from the two dialogues from Cross s dad are girlie they both don t sound to be something that an old professional businessman will say Businessmen don t tend to speak Conyo languaged Hindi ako maniyak atsaka anggara may ganto pala Wahaha Ngayon lang ako naka encounter ng isang babae na tinatapatan ako ng pepperspray sa mukha From now on I will call you peppy shortcut sa pepperspray You re so funny Chad Jimenez DNP p16e Hey you old man Anong kalokohan na naman ito I told you I don t want a personal maid or assistant or whatever na bubuntot buntot sakin Cross Sandford DNP p33f Don t worry I ll give you a ride pauwi I have my car Chad Jimenez DNP p12 pauwi may be replaced with home J ILLOGICAL SCENES ANDOR DIALOGUES a Philippines s emergency hotline Someone please call 911 mamamatay ata ako sa pagod DNP p76 Ang 911 ay hindi po emergency hotline ng Pilipinas para sa US po yan 117 naman po ang para sa Pilipinas b Cashier customer scene Ano po maam Naglolokohan po ba tayo dito Hindi naman po ata tama yan andaming naubos na oras para lang iregister lahat ng binili niyo tingnan niyo nga po ang dami na pong naiinip sa pag iintay sa pila dahil sa dami ng binili tapos hindi niyo pala bibilhin Hindi pepewede yung ganiyan It s either babayaran nyo po yan or tatawag po ako ng guard DNP p46 First off what the cashier said shows unprofessionalism If you are a cashier no matter how bad the customer is you can t shout to the customer Always always always remember the saying The customers are always right The cashier may have simply and politely uttered Sorry po Ma am hindi na po pwedeng ibalik na punch na po kasi ang mga item Iyan din ang madalas sabihin ng mga cashier sa mga katulad na sitwasyonAnother thing di yata t hindi alam ni Eya ang mga karapatan niya bilang mamimili gayong apat na taon na niyang pinag aaralan ang isang business related na course at nagkaroon pa siya ng subject na EKONOMIKS noong high school She must at least be aware that no matter what happens she may in any circumstance still decide not to buy an item regardless of the fact that it s already been punched in the counter unless may hiya si Eya na magbigay ng hassle sa store dahil kakailanganing ipatawag ang manager para mag void ng mga item c Lory s bodyguards inside the campus This one s illogical dahilUna isang malaking sampal para sa Willford kung magkakaroon ng bodyguards sa loob ng campus ang mga estudyante nila Ibig kasing sabihin niyon hindi pinagkakatiwalaan ng mga magulang ang security system ng eskwelahan Hindi ba t marapat lamang na sa ganoong uri ng paaralan e ramdam na ramdam ng mga mag aaral ang pagiging protektado at hindi na nila kailangang magkaroon ng mga bodyguard Pangalawa maaaring makasuhan ang bodyguard ni Lory Labag po sa batas ang manutok ng baril lalo pa t menor de edad na nga babae pa ang tinutukan Ever heard of RA 9262 Tapos may follow up pang death threat si Lory Pangatlo hindi ba lapitin ng media ang Willford Imagine mayayaman at models ang mga nag aaral doon It must be a one of a kind school baka nga na fe feature pa ito sa mga TV show Di yata napabalita ang ginawa ng bodyguard gayong laging naghahanap ng scoop ang mga miyembro ng press How about the Mean Girl Hindi man lang ba siya nagsumbong sa parents niya Traumatic ang matutukan ng baril right Hindi man lang ba nila kakasuhan ang bodyguard Anyway hindi ko naman po sinasabing hindi pwedeng magkaroon ng bodyguards si Lory yon nga lang kailangang alam nila kung paano sila dapat kumilos iyong hindi sila katatakutan ng mga estudyante sa Willford Halimbawa ang simpleng paglapit sa nang aaway kila Eya at tahimik na aristokratong paggamit ng kamay panghawi para umawat ay sapat na bilang warning Naniniwala akong matatalino ang mga college student sa Willford kaya madali na nilang maadidistinguish na bodyguards ang mga lumapit sa kanila at alam na nila ang kahulugan ng gestures ng mga ito d Sosy Drunkard Woot Miss crush mo ako noh kaya mo ako binangga Halika miss sama ka sakin let s have some fun DNP p18 Having the dialogues coming from a street drunkard isn t this too educated I mean karamihan sa mga lasinggerong nagkalat sa lansangan ay hindi gumagamit ng TagLish Karamihan din hindi Let s have some fun ang sasabihin kundi Huwag kang mag alala mag e enjoy tayo sa pupuntahan natin Sundan pa ng mala demonyong halakhak e Eya s diary entry at the party This part is confusing dahil naglagay na ng diary entry si Eya gayong hindi pa naman pala tapos ang party at hindi pa siya nakakauwi para magsulat ng diary Dala ni Eya ang diary niya sa party at nagsulat siya sa dilim ganun po ba K POOR EDITING Hindi ko na po pahahabain nang husto ang opinion ko ukol dito Kahit naman kasi anong sabihin ko iisa lang bottom line niyon I saw that there s a very LITTLE effort given to the editing process considering that editing is the most crucial part of publishing a story it speaks for the credibility of the publishers to publish good reads As for my last statement sana next time hindi ko na makitang sobrang liit ng effort na binigay sa editing process P600 from every avid reader is not a joke tama po ba Therefore the price paid for the book has to be compensated well Well furnished book lang okay na Note Lilinawin ko lang po I have nothing against Denny I adore her writing actually Sides hindi naman po writer lang ang kailangan sa pag e edit tama po ba It s a work that has to be done hand in hand by the parties involved Sample technical errorsa Wrong Spellingappartment apartmentnuh noyung yung yongtyan tiyan t yanpanget pangitnako nakukelangan kailanganata yatanangangaggat nangangagatumorder um ordernanunuod nanonoodhuy hoykalhating kalahating WRONG CHOICE OF WORDS WRONG GRAMMAR Master someone wants to apply for the young master s maid DNP p30Edited Master someone wants to apply as the young master s maid Can I sit beside you DNP p41Edited May I sit beside you In cases like this the modal can denotes ability to do something as if asking Kaya ko bang umupo sa tabi mo while may denotes aking for permission to do something as if asking Maaari ba akong umupo sa tabi mo Ibig bang sabhin niyan nagpepeke pekean ka lang ng luha kanina DNP p 103 Saying so is like saying that Chad s tears are true because of the additional pekean 4th year Accounting student na ako DNP p6Edited 4th year Accountacy student na ako Othersna dun na roonUmm sir Umm Sirtinulak ko siya ng malakas tinulak ko siya nang malakasatsaka isa pa atsakaisa pa using these at a time is redundantna depressed na depress


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  • Mass Market Paperback
  • 128
  • Diary ng Panget
  • HaveYouSeenThisGirL
  • Filipino; Pilipino
  • 03 February 2018
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